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Oh! It’s an ad. As ads go, this one takes WAY too long to get to its point. You just babble for a long time first. There’s a reason most tv and radio ads are like 15 seconds long. I didn’t even know what I was supposed to be critiquing for most of the build-up. This is also probably not the right forum to be advertising your uh, vaginal research company? We’re not exactly your target audience. Actually it seems like you ought to be making this appeal directly to Drs and pharma companies, no?

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