You sound a bit unsure of yourself, coming across with more confidence might help you out.
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Anonymous#11d
Ooh okay what would make it sound more confident?
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AnonymousOP1d
leave out the “hey if it’s okay” and questions. keep it light and casual. say something like “hey i’d love to go out sometime lemme know what you think”
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Anonymous#11d
Don’t ask just tell. Be like “we will go out (insert date)”