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A quote from my book I’m writing: “Universal curiosity always results in determinant chaos. What’s a void without entropy.”-Me
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Anonymous 9w

Maybe “The void isn’t without entropy” would sound a bit more impactful

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Anonymous 8w

Is this meant to be more sci fi or fantasy? It's a little bit sci-babble for my tastes--which doesn't necessarily mean it's bad, but it doesn't really mean anything from a science perspective

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Anonymous replying to -> #1 9w

Ok I like that!! I was actually looking for suggestions so thank you. It’s supposed to be an opener line.

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