Maybe “The void isn’t without entropy” would sound a bit more impactful
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Anonymous8w
Is this meant to be more sci fi or fantasy? It's a little bit sci-babble for my tastes--which doesn't necessarily mean it's bad, but it doesn't really mean anything from a science perspective
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Anonymous#19w
Ok I like that!! I was actually looking for suggestions so thank you. It’s supposed to be an opener line.