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To think even now I’d probably give more than I should just to taste your ashtray of a mouth once more. I still remember the way you taste with blood on your lips and thinking that noting sweeter had ever been known to my mouth aside for your name.
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Anonymous 1d

wtf this is so poetic it made me want him too

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Anonymous 1d

You poem here is not good other comment tweaking/ tasteless sorry

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Anonymous 21h

Your ashtray of a mouth consumes me with a cancer that is both contagious and undesirable to cure. It corrodes my conscience and flesh for need.

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Anonymous replying to -> #1 1d

I always thought about making a little book of em, Lord knows I’ve made at least a hundred of these posts by now. Maybe I’d even use my yikyak handle as my pen name. Though idk if the name “slizzered” would be taken all that seriously on a Barnes and Nobel shelf/table…

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Anonymous replying to -> OP 1d

Ya know short poems are really beautiful like milk and honey? I say go for it but give the rough draft to your man first

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Anonymous replying to -> #1 1d

My sister liked Milk and Honey but I’m more of a “Pillow Thoughts” series kinda guy. “I Hope You Stay” was also pretty good.

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Anonymous replying to -> OP 1d

you being a guy was a plot twist. write your book king!!!

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Anonymous replying to -> #1 1d

lol sorry about that, I guess I do leave my writing intentionally vague in some ways.

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