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Is it ok to say “pillowy afro” here’s the sentence (couldn’t fit the whole thing sry): “… her pillowy afro beautifully framed her angelic face, highlighting her maroon glitter highlighted cheeks.”

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Anonymous 7w

I nearly hurled at the repetition of “highlight” so I changed it to “highlighting her maroon glitter speckled cheeks.”

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Anonymous 7w

I feel like pillowy has a denser connotation, it would be fine to just say fluffy

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Anonymous

#1 7w

Thank you!

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