The pants are cool ^w^ but I agree with #1 about cohesion. A different hat for sure since the color is more of a warm tone while the rest of the outfit is more cool tone. And I think some silver jewelry would look nice :D
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Anonymous2w
no cohesion, no accessories. i can see the vibe you’re trying to go for but each of the pieces you chose are completely different and there’s nothing tying them all together