I would reword “I’m starting to get anxious about housing” to “the lack of communication has cause quite a bit of anxiety as we are scheduled to move out of our current residence on the 17th and had plans to move into the current rental the same day” and then also remove the last sentence “I’m just getting stressed about it” and just say “I look forward to hearing from you”

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Alright guys thanks for your comments. Is this better?

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Hi Chelsea, Good morning. I really don’t mean to bother you, but I’m starting to get very anxious about housing. I am scheduled to move out of my apartment on the 17th and I was planning to move into the duplex the same day. (1/2)

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it’s one message I just couldn’t post the whole thing in one comment

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i think you could be less apologetic and keep the message more brief. it’s her job to get back to you. “good morning. i’m following up to confirm my lease. i’m scheduled to move (etc..). my roommate and i are prepared (etc…). can you please let me know when to expect it (etc…). …have both been very helpful.” and then send. the (etc…) are the sentences i would keep and not change

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LOL she just sent the lease!!!!!! Thank you guys!!

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