Girl Talk on Yik Yak | sometimes I wonder if anyone other than me cares about natural seeming dialogue in books or other media. like it takes me out of it so bad when the speeches are TOO well written, like too much so for the character to say in their situation. is that j me

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sometimes I wonder if anyone other than me cares about natural seeming dialogue in books or other media. like it takes me out of it so bad when the speeches are TOO well written, like too much so for the character to say in their situation. is that j me

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Anonymous 7w

ex. zendaya in euphoria having a paragraph+ long and poetic speech with NO FILLER WORDS OR AWKWARD PAUSED AT SLL while her character is tripping balls. like unable to tell up from down tripling balls. I just can’t stay invested bc it makes no sense to me

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