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Girl Talk 1w
can someone read over my essay and tell me what to change? its about the constitution which i feel kind of iffy complimenting anything about the govt rn but the prize is $300-$200 and i really need it
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Anonymous 1w

What was the prompt?

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Anonymous 1w

Without knowing what you were suppose to write about, this was very good. Very clear and well structured. I really do like the back and forth between the positive impact the constitution has had during cruel times for many. Good job!

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Anonymous 1w

I don’t think anything really needs to be changed again without knowing what you were suppose to write about I can’t say much. It is a good essay

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Anonymous replying to -> #1 1w

sorry guys 😖😖, i forgot, it was just what does the constitution mean to you

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 1w

sorry!! it was what the constitution means to you. thank you!!!

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Anonymous replying to -> OP 1w

If you feel these things about the constitution then you’re all good, but if you have differing opinions or negative ones then you should definitely write about them.

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 1w

i do feel these things, it just feels weird saying good things while such a shitshow is happening in the government 😞

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Anonymous replying to -> OP 1w

And that is valid! There is nothing wrong with your feelings as long as you know the government hasn’t and aren’t good

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