Anonymous #1 20h

Yeah I might need to make some ads that show the design instead of the shirt due to the color choice but I didn’t wanna over whelm the ad since once you go into the link it shows you the design off of the mock up

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Anonymous boojangus 20h

The ad itself is great. However, if your audience has spends more than two seconds trying to understand the shirt, they will give up. Is this a shirt for a band or movie? What even is the red object and blue object attached to the person?

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Anonymous #1 18h

So the shirt is apart of a tee shirt contest where the theme is “heaven or hell”and every shirt sold I get 5 dollars from. I was give 6 colors to chose from and could only use two. So I did blue and red and base this shirt on the “Charlie’s inferno song” It’s an Angel directing you to hell and Ik ima play around with that 26 dollar shirt instead since that seems more clear to sell. Here the design off the shirt.

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Anonymous boojangus 18h

That seems desperate. Like telling someone in front of me to use a magnifying glass or telling them what it says since it’s difficult for the eye to comprehend. You chose sky blue on a cream background, that doesn’t pop out so well. Maybe a dark navy. It’s an incredible design, but it feels like you are putting in an extreme amount of detail it’s hard for others to comprehend what it is.

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Anonymous boojangus 18h

Maybe since you designed it, you’re used to seeing details so closely. Print this out, put it on your fridge and see how it feels walking up to it. It might look like a blur from a distance. I worked in videography. Sometimes you work so intensely, you don’t see all the details of the bigger picture. I would watch my project after exporting and see different details or things to fix.

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Anonymous #1 18h

I’ll keep this in mind for future projects. This is like the final design and I did survey with 10 people to see if it works so that’s why it is how it is and I know this mock-up is from the company that is printing/ hosting the contest so I can see why it’s hard to see

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Like contest is live so screw it ig might have to blow this picture up if people can’t see it

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