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Seriously what can i do better ab this
11 upvotes, 3 comments. Yik Yak image post by Anonymous in Share Your Art. "Seriously what can i do better ab this"
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Anonymous 7w

my best advice is to get confident in your linework. the proportions look good! the positioning makes sense! the only thing i really see is "sketchy" linework, which does not look as polished when compared to smoother, longer lines. you just have to make what exists look "smoother"

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Anonymous 7w

Make the transition from wrist to forearm longer, it goes up in size too quick. Another is enlarged the hands as make the arms larger overall as the bicep is smaller than the forearm. Lengthen the Aron on the right side atleast in the elbow to hand area. This is due to it being shorter than the elbow to shoulder when in reality when you bend your arm your elbow to wrist is approximately the same length as shoulder to elbow a whole hand adds several inches to it (or one hand length longer)

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Anonymous 5w

Think abt ur composition - maybe not for this piece since its far along already but u wanna start considering how the eye moves across the piece and the empty spaces etc

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