Well since the bust is so busy the simplicity of the window works well actually. I think maybe a thicker like for the frame might look good as almost all of ur lines are similar size

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I would say add some line weight around the piece, but with a simpler window it lets that head really shine. Great work!

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Holy shit this is incredible. I absolutely love it. The only thing I would add is if you actually want it tattooed you might want to simplify the flowers just a tad because those fine lines in the center might be hard to get good definition on

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Add some thickness to the lead lines and beveled glass jewels at the intersections of the lead, they’re the most expensive stained glass element. -a stained glass artist’s daughter.

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