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I wrote this poem about my internal struggles with approaching girls:
27 upvotes, 22 comments. Yik Yak image post by Anonymous in Writing. "I wrote this poem about my internal struggles with approaching girls:"
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Anonymous 1d

… in your own words you simultaneously give her all the power and then blame her and frame her as a villain for your own perception of the power you freely gave. It’s definitely got feeling but dude, please seek therapy.

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Anonymous 2d

Oh I love this!

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Anonymous 1d

This is rlly good

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Anonymous replying to -> #3 22h

Maybe writing another poem on the power you hold within you and how that works within your perception of you might be a good follow up to this one. Takes away her power ‘against you’ maybe?

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 12h

Or just ya know write a poem about practicing holding your own power as you interact with others and seeing them as people as you heal rather than blaming people for the pedestals you put them on.

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Anonymous replying to -> #3 4h

Where are you seeing that I put someone on a pedestal?

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 4h

OP did. He gives her all the power in the interaction. Makes her responsible for tearing him apart if he doesn’t like what she says. All I’m saying is hey maybe let’s view people as equals and not instantly make ourselves the victims of our own design and frame the other person as an insta-villain and your take from that was apparently “yeah! Take all her power!”

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Anonymous replying to -> #3 4h

Well yeah but if someone takes advantage of you when ur in a vulnerable state and saying they’re gonna give you money by a specific date I think there’s a right to be angry

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 4h

Esp if it was going to give that person a break for once

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 4h

So that they could focus on other things for their final year bc they rlly don’t want two more yrs for their bachelors

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 4h

But nothing in his poem suggests she took advantage of him. He even said this is about his issues approaching women. So by his own words the way to interpret this is he’s always a victim when he approaches a woman and she can (and will) tear him apart. That is his perception.

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 4h

I have no idea what you’re talking about now. What break? I’m like missing half of this conversation.

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Anonymous replying to -> #3 4h

He should grow a pair like the rest of us. I’m not talking about the goddamn poem. If he really thinks that he should start taking a look at himself because playing victim doesn’t mean you play defense. I don’t but if I feel wronged I’m getting on the offensive bc there was no reason to get served this shit over what happened. I’m dealing with adult problems that require adult solutions and I’m tired of playing by the rules.

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Anonymous replying to -> #3 4h

Fuck off

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 4h

Lmao you sir have a whole other host of problems. Hope you get some help. ✌️

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Anonymous replying to -> #3 4h

🖕🖕🖕🖕 imagine being a troll poster on yikyak. Imagine having the time

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 4h

Lmao I just responded to a poem and you commented on my response and went off the rails 🤣 there’s been no trolling done.

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 3h

Are you like super high or something this early in the morning? 💀

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Anonymous replying to -> #3 3h

Bruh u don’t hide urself well on this app jfc

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Anonymous replying to -> #3 3h

I wish I could afford to be.

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 3h

No I’ve had enough

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 3h

Ok bye 👋 hoping you are high if not… seek on campus therapy or something or maybe just get some good food and sleep. Idk.

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