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Also, does anyone have any tips to write it so that you know clearly that this is toxic and a bad thing?
Guys I have a question. I’ve been writing a new character for my little oc world. And she’s gonna be attracted to a 14 year old, even tho she’s 500+. Is that okay? It’s not to romanticise P£dophilia, it’s just that she’s supposed to represent the darker
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Anonymous 10w

Does the character think it’s wrong? Has she accepted being a monster in this way, or is she disgusted and in denial about it? Is this her big crime, or is she terrible in other ways? Because generally if she’s already kinda evil you won’t have to convince your audience that this is also evil, it’ll just be assumed

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Anonymous 10w

Societal clues, like how others perceive the attraction. Given, that’s a two sided blade, because not everyone’s perspectives should be taken to heart. Maybe try mixing the feeling of attraction in with other emotions. Basically, make the character question whether or not what she’s feeling is genuine attraction. I’ve never written something like this; sorry, if this isn’t super helpful.

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 10w

It’s kind of complicated 😭 She doesn’t believe what she’s doing is good or wrong, she’s just emotionless- if it nots attraction. And yeah, I guess she’s not the main villain, but she can still be seen as a bad person- not really terrible tho

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