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I made a poem about Jason Todd (Batman adjacent) TW: slight gore | I’m not sure how I feel about the last few lines.

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15 upvotes, 1 comment. Yik Yak image post by Anonymous in Writing. "I made a poem about Jason Todd (Batman adjacent) TW: slight gore | I’m not sure how I feel about the last few lines."

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Anonymous 20w

Great start, one grammatical error. In the 3rd stanza, 3rd sentence, please correct “braking” to “breaking.” Then, you’ll be set!! Nice job!

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