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This is my first poem since I was like 14 so any criticism would be awesome!

2 upvotes, 2 comments. Yik Yak image post by Anonymous in Writing. "This is my first poem since I was like 14 so any criticism would be awesome!"

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Anonymous 17w

Split into 3 stanzas!! Will make it sm easier to read and digest !

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Anonymous 17w

Change title !!

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